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February 12th, 2013, 12:41 PM
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I'm having a Girl!
Join Date: Jan 2013
Location: Texas;; Cali is home <3
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I have started book one, I am about 8 chapters in and can completely see where all of you are coming from...it is written pretty bad, and as much as I use "..." I don't think it should be in a book...it just seems silly!
Murmur! Muttered...and "er" are driving me nuts.
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