[mommy jenn]

hi ladies

for a change im emersing myself into my wedding planning to stop myself from obsessing about ovulation. ewcm and all the other stuffs.

im trying to word my invitations and i have come up with this, what do you think and should i add or change anything

please be honest i love constructive critism

<div align="center">Brett R
Son of Gavin and Desiree R
And
Jennifer S
Daughter of Ryan S and Vivienne H
Invite you to celebrate this special day where two hearts become one
Brett and Jenn will be exchanging vows under the African sky of
Tala Game Reserve
on Saturday the sixteenth of August two thousand and eight.</div>

my fiance wants the date to be set like it is written out in full.... i like that he is getting involved so i was sooo pleased when he said he wanted it this way so i have done it this way. what ya think?

[greenchild]

ooh I always think it is so elegant if the date is written out! I also like to see it in some sort of fancy italic writing, but one that isn't too hard to read.
I love how you have the place written out!!

[mommy jenn]

yeah greenchild i know exactly what you saying!! thats exactly what im going to do!! glad you like it

[Eleysia]

I think it sounds very formal / elegant Good job!!

[..Jessica..]

I love how you have everything written! Very nice!!

[mom 2 haley & tyler]

I think it sounds beautiful. I'm so glad your fiance is helping out.

[Celry]

It looks great! I love the date written out. One thing though, and I know it's super picky. Technically, the date should be written two thousand eight, not two thousand and eight. Most people use the "and" in the middle though, so I don't think many people would notice. Like I said, it's super picky. I'm an editing nerd.

[mommy jenn]

celry, you right... i studied editing at uni and i never really came across that but when someone says a phone number with thousand for example 2008 i hate it when people are like "my number is 555 2 thousand and 8" im like... no its not its 555 2 thousand 8 or 2 zero zero 8...crazy hey?? ill speak to the man

[mommy jenn]

<div align="center">Brett R
Son of Gavin and Desiree R
And
Jennifer S
Daughter of Ryan S and Vivienne H
Invite you to celebrate this special day where two hearts become one
Brett and Jenn will be exchanging vows under the African sky of
Tala Game Reserve
on Saturday the sixteenth of August two thousand and eight
The ceremony begins at three post meridian.</div>

look at the time... whatcha think?

[mmgre703]

It looks good to me!!! I bet you can't wait for the day to come. Time will fly by. Gosh in June it will be 2yrs for me and it seems like it was just yesterday. I'm sure it will be a beautiful ceremony!!! Have fun planning it there are many websites to help. But I'm sure you have been on them.




Megan

[katiegirl]

Jenn, it sounds very elegant.

You will have to keep us up to date on everything.

Do you have a dress yet?

[mommy jenn]

i have a dress at a shop thats waiting for me, i have put a deposit down they say that if i change my mind they will put the dress back on for sale and i can get the money back... it depends weather im pregnant or not.... hehe... i have a maternity dress maker whos waiting for me but she said she can only make the dress a week before the wedding so if i get pregnant by then then she can do it if not then i spose i will be wearing the one at the shop!!