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April 22nd, 2008, 04:45 AM
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This is my entry for this weeks SSSC. Please let me know what you think...

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April 22nd, 2008, 12:34 PM
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I think I'd adjust the stroke and drop shadow on your text. I'd make the stroke a little smaller and make your shadow a little closer. I love the animation and the feathering. I'm not sure if it would look better taking the drop shadow off of the flowers. I'd kind of like to see it without the shadow on them or maybe just lower it so it's really light.
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April 22nd, 2008, 12:51 PM
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Teresa mentioned everything I would have said. I love the feathering and animation!
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April 22nd, 2008, 05:20 PM
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Okay, here is the corrected version. Is there anything else anyone can see? I really appreciate it!

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April 22nd, 2008, 06:23 PM
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Oh, I like that much better!
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April 22nd, 2008, 06:57 PM
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April 22nd, 2008, 07:57 PM
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Thanks, Teresa and Rachel!
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April 23rd, 2008, 08:08 AM
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you did an awesome job onit! love your second one.
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