Hi Bailey! I think you did a great job on the page - especially for your first one!

The only tip I've got is that you might want to add drop shadows to a few of the other elements as well so they don't look so flat - like the green "clip" on lower left pic, the staple, the word tage, and the brown ribbon. That will create a little more depth and keep the page cohesive. The shadow shouldn't be offset too far, but just enough to give it a little bit of depth (like the other images on the page that already have the drop shadow).
I really like the colors and layout that you have and think it goes well with Noah's adorable pictures. Great job!!