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May 6th, 2010, 10:34 AM
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Ok I have found a really cute poem that is written for a candy buffet but I am wanting to edit it a little to make it into a cookie buffet poem.

Here is what it originally reads:

Step right up
To the Candy Buffet
It’s a sweet addition
To a wonderful day.

This is a treat
We are offering you,
On this beautiful night
Celebrating our “I do’s.”

Use the scoop
Choose what you like
Leave some for others
Be polite.


As you enjoy
Your bag of treats
Please remember
Love is sweet!

The only line I am having a problem with is the "use the scoop" line since obviously you can't scoop cookies.

I was thinking of saying, "take a peek" but then I wasn't sure if that sounded to vulgar or something

What do you ladies think? If you don't think that will work do you have any suggestions?
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May 6th, 2010, 11:12 AM
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I like Take a Peek
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May 6th, 2010, 11:49 AM
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Use the tongs
to take some along


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May 6th, 2010, 03:05 PM
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I like that one
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May 6th, 2010, 03:31 PM
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I think that is super cute! and it would be fine with "take a peek" I think. and I have to ask, where did you find that becuase that is fantastic and we are doing a candy buffet, I would love to have a little saying to go there with it.
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May 6th, 2010, 04:47 PM
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Take a peek is cute!
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May 6th, 2010, 05:26 PM
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Hmm I like take a peek and I like Shannon's too. Ugh I hate making decisions . Vi I'm thinking I just googled cookie/candy buffet poem and found it, I have had it saved on my comp for a while though.
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May 6th, 2010, 05:53 PM
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I like take a peek and also Shannon's suggestion.
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May 6th, 2010, 06:41 PM
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i like take a peek! shan's option is cute too!
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May 6th, 2010, 09:26 PM
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It is so cute! I need to go google some stuff so I can find something like that! thanks for the idea!!!
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May 7th, 2010, 03:52 AM
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Very cute idea! Take a peek and Shannon's idea are great
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May 7th, 2010, 09:02 AM
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