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mommymayb December 5th, 2011 06:55 PM

Opinions on announcement poems I came up with
 
To announce the baby to extended family and friends we want to send Christmas cards with pictures of me and my boyfriend with a picture of the ultra sound I had wrote a couple poems to go in the card and wanted to get some opinions.

You'll never guess what's rolling this way
It's not a snowball
Santa or his sleigh

Kate and nick are happy as can be
because June 14th
We are expecting a baby


The second is

this Christmas under the tree
will be preasants for Kate nick and me
Who is me?
Keep on reading and you'll see
Next year in this picture there will be three



The next


Christmas is a time of cheer
Kate and nick have three stockings hung with care
Knowing that a baby will soon be here



And the last

Merry Christmas it will be here soon
We hope under the tree is filled with gifts
Nick and Kate will have to wait
Their biggest preasants will be six months late
He or she will arive in June!

Let me know which is your favorite and if you would change anything please I love them all and can't decide which I like the most hopefully you lovely ladies can help


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