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January 21st, 2010, 02:03 PM
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I made an invitation for DH's cousin's birthday. What do you ladies think? Honesty please. Any CC is appreciated! Thanks!

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January 21st, 2010, 02:05 PM
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looks really nice hun!! The only thing is the details of the party does not show up really well, might be the font or maybe the colours?
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January 21st, 2010, 02:11 PM
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I agree about the font.. more so for the smaller text - the sleepover and stuff.. otherwise, I think it looks great! Really good job Crystal

Oh, I don't know how you'd incorporate this but just an idea.. I remember my cousin's 10th birthday party and all she kept talking about was the "DD Club" The double-digits club and I thought that was too cute!
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January 21st, 2010, 02:14 PM
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yeah i would change the font of the time and location to black...cause the pink is hard to see
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January 21st, 2010, 02:15 PM
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I was going to say the same thing as Naz. Get rid of the black star. Put the details there and the words sleepover etc where you have the details now. I'd move Dance Party down a tad, the 10 closer to her name with big under her name. That will give you more room for the details to be bigger and easier to read. I'd also go with Black with a small white stroke for the sleepover etc.

Otherwise I think you did a great job and it is adorable!!
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